Blackout

Blackout

A Poem by Phantom.Bite
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A short Acronym poem

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Burning hot fire under my skin
 Losing myself to a monster
 Angry, frustrated, and broken I lash out again...
 Can't you understand?!
 Keep away before the beast is released
 Or you will end up a pointless martyr
 Understand that I can't even save myself
 The demon takes over when I blackout.

© 2013 Phantom.Bite


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This reminds me of a scene from the movie Anger Management. Nice word usage. Demons, martyr, beast, monster, broken, lash, burning. I love this poem! Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


A good one...:).................

Posted 7 Years Ago


the word choice in this is so powerful. I could feel your emotions coming through in this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love how strong this poem is, as well as how it adopts a voice of its own. Wonderful start and welcome to writerscafe!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you :) you guys have really encouraged me

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is wonderful, i like this write it's dark. Awesome!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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