Short Nothings

Short Nothings

A Story by Philip Smith
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Short Nothings

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‎"I miss my Home"

Only if I knew where she was, is it an actual place or the feeling of belonging. The 
comfort zone when laying your head down for a nights sleep? Is it overrated or 
underrated? Does one even vote on such things? Is it a place or is it a person that makes 
home, home. I miss her so much. I want her back. They say "home is where the heart is"

well my heart is empty so I guess I need to go buy some furniture.

© 2012 Philip Smith


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my mind took off wondering what the furniture could be. I am sure it is not the wooden and cloth kind. I have moved 4 times in the past 4 months and I certainly know about home not feeling like home. It is kind of like the idea of being alone in a room full of people.......excellent piece.

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They say "home is wherre the heart is" well my heart is empty so i guess I need to go by some furniture. Pure genious!!! Amazing story! I love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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LOL!!! Thats last sentence is very funny, though the whole thing is sad. I like it though and the heart is never empty, no matter what you feel. And home is where the heart is, and it goes with you everywhere!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I like the humor at the end. It puts perspective into "soul searching". In my opinion, most of my self-deprecating longings are just "Whoa-is-me" b_llsh_t!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful little piece. It has a wonderful dry, droll, wit running throughout which lightens and heightens the sincere, and pained, question it is begging to be answered.

Bravo! I enjoyed that it did not linger in a maudlin place but nor did it deny the sadness of not feeling entirely at home anywhere. I must read more of your work now!

Thank you for sharing and do keep writing,
A.E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Know this feeling well. Like not ever feeling quite whole. well captured in such a short write. great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

my mind took off wondering what the furniture could be. I am sure it is not the wooden and cloth kind. I have moved 4 times in the past 4 months and I certainly know about home not feeling like home. It is kind of like the idea of being alone in a room full of people.......excellent piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh! Love this! Especially the last line. This seems to be very well thought out and I really appreciate the angst in this a lot. Well done, as always.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great last line. good sentence structures.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Philip Smith
Philip Smith

Small town in Texas, TX



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Just learning this trade and loving it. My writing style could best be described as all over the map. I play with adventure, paranormal/supernatural, thriller, to even a children's series. None as yet.. more..

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