Festoon of Fervour

Festoon of Fervour

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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If dreams came true ……...

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Festoon of Fervour



She began melting to his endeavours

As gentle hotness of passions breathe

Fell upon the exposed join between

Her earlobes and a tremulous throat


Deftly brushing fingers through soft hair

He tenderly turned now radiant face

Towards his eager welcoming features

And deeply looked into her steamy eyes


Pressing his lips to hers with tender force

An untrammelled volcano of intentions

Shot blissful tremors through their veins

Declaring enhanced pleasure yet to come


Intricately intertwined upon each other

Each yielding vocal admiration whispers

From tender touch privileged admirations

Bring delightful tingling into their mantra


Upon an ember sun-drenched silk coverlet

Flowers of evening rhapsody were explored

Nakedly they honoured esteem togetherness

To rhythms of their beating cadence hearts


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© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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What's your plan Mr. ....to set cafe on Fire lol...
Love the pic... they look like a good pair of melted chocolate bars hahah... I think I am hungry...

That area of ear lobe and throat.....it's really a hidden love spot...I can guarantee any female will melt into puddle....heheh..you sure know your tricks... :p
Smooth..silky...smoking hot...that's what I have to say... :)


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Years Ago

I have a fire bucket beside my writing table just in case of spontaneous combustion - thank you for.. read more
Ardra

2 Years Ago

You will need more than a bucket...a truck may be hehehe



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Your lovely seductive poem contains the one thing I long for in all sensuous writing . . . please take your time getting to that first kiss . . . show a kiss as encompassing many parts (ears, neck, face . . . not just lips!) I love the way you do just that & I wish it were done more often in the flesh as well! *smile* Your poem goes from a more specific kiss to the last two stanzas which are less specific yet plenty tempting. All in all, this is a subtly painted scene which leaves plenty to our imaginations! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

' Fell upon the exposed join between ~ Her earlobes and a tremulous throat ' - definitely pre-breakfast..

' Each yielding vocal admiration whispers ~ From tender touch privileged admirations ' - and that should make dinner's near perfect hors d'oevre.

An almost subtle feast, Mr. O'fee.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Years Ago

Just wait to see what the midnight snack will bring … warm thanks for your exquisite review :-)
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

I'm sure I'd be shocked..convent girl, me !!!
Plenty of ice in my drink please. You really are on fire at the moment, and we are all burning with you. Great writing, wonderful language, and you create very sensual imagery. For that I thank you. Posted image a perfect match for your Festoon of Fervour.

Chris



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Years Ago

A flattering review - I'm blushing from your words - Thank you - :-)
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are welcome
Fanning myself here. Very sensual...slow build up to a very steamy scene. Well written. Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review - :-)
I'm thinking I should have lived a little of this this morning before leaving for work. Hot without being over the top, a good blending of romance and erotic. The picture does help...lol. Nice to wake up to this torrid piece. Great job!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Years Ago

Your review is much appreciated - thanks - :-)
It sounds like a scene straight out of a Harlequin romance novel; replete with brimming descriptions. I've never been very adept at the genre but you certainly seem to have the knack of it. Cheers.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Years Ago

Many thanks for your review :-)
What's your plan Mr. ....to set cafe on Fire lol...
Love the pic... they look like a good pair of melted chocolate bars hahah... I think I am hungry...

That area of ear lobe and throat.....it's really a hidden love spot...I can guarantee any female will melt into puddle....heheh..you sure know your tricks... :p
Smooth..silky...smoking hot...that's what I have to say... :)


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Years Ago

I have a fire bucket beside my writing table just in case of spontaneous combustion - thank you for.. read more
Ardra

2 Years Ago

You will need more than a bucket...a truck may be hehehe
sometimes there is something real in fantasy we experience

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Years Ago

Too true -many thanks for reading and reviewing :-)

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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