I Will Kiss Your Scars

I Will Kiss Your Scars

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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In times of need ... a true friend

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I Will Kiss Your Scars



Your history has no relevance

I acknowledge you as you are

Bygone tribulation left wounds

But you survived harsh lessons

To rise up to be much stronger


Reading your heartfelt writings

Reveals subconscious sensitivity

With undercurrent vulnerabilities

Where wanders a confused spirit

Searching for true love’s rescue


As past betrayal created caution

You built an emotional partition

With fear as its foundation stone

Thus using reluctance as a shield

Deflecting any fresh relationships


So as your kindred friend I promise

To cloak your insecurities in smiles

Forever my soul support is primed

If you need to call on my assistance

I will kiss your scars until they heal


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2019

© 2019 Phill Oz O'fee


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There was a time, not so many years ago, when this was exactly what I wished for, from a certain man in my life. But it's a tricky balance, being supportive of another person's healing gains, but not coming at this with a "fix her" approach. That's the perfect balance your words convey . . . this is how you stand by someone without assuming your assistance will be needed, just offering affection (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Precisely my friend - I never presume or push support, it is enough to offer and wait (but not too l.. read more



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'I Will Kiss Your Scars'
Phil Oz O'fee,
To accept the reality in one another of 'coping mechanisms' is so winsome. I think that we all have unique experiences and deal with the effects accordingly-uniquely. We are complex after all as is all of our lives. You have given voice to what is needed by all of us. Sounds like love to me.
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Thank you Kathy - your review also reminded me of these lyrical words;
And if it takes me for.. read more
Not all scars are visible...the toughest ones to deal with are those you cannot see...it's hard to know how to approach someone with emotional scars...the risk is being pushed away when you want to help. All you can do is be there when they understand you're there to help, no questions asked...no reward desired.

A good write, Phill.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Thanks Ted - I can relate to your reflective review - :-)
There was a time, not so many years ago, when this was exactly what I wished for, from a certain man in my life. But it's a tricky balance, being supportive of another person's healing gains, but not coming at this with a "fix her" approach. That's the perfect balance your words convey . . . this is how you stand by someone without assuming your assistance will be needed, just offering affection (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Precisely my friend - I never presume or push support, it is enough to offer and wait (but not too l.. read more
So deeply touching. I resonated with these lines and thank you for these words this morning. All good wishes.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Thank you Chris - I return to you my best wishes as well my friend … :-)
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Then I will thank you again:)
Imagining scars, buried deep inside memories and emotions is incredibly profound. Showcasing a true vulnerability, something worse than physical pain. Your words are precious. Much love!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Your comments are very apt for my humble write - thank you very much my friend .. :-)
Scars run deep i like ur poem good work

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your encouraging review... :-)
A very well framed poem..simple words and have anikity to make anyone get connected



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Many thank yous for your kind review … :-)
This is unconditional love, maybe romantic or just platonic, but love nonetheless. This touched me. As someone deceived and hurt by a close loved one, I felt the sincerity and warmth of your words. Thank you for sharing this poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

A kind review my friend … so glad you could relate … :-)
A friend indeed to recognise that scars take a long to time to heal, in appearance they fade but under the layers still they bleed...
Patience and unending love is just what the heart doctor prescribes

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Thank you Stella - your comments are spot on … :-)
Oh.

My.

Word.

This........

This is beautiful. I love this beyond words and it touched me personally. Reminds me of the relationship I have with my ex still 😭💙

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

What a wonderful review - thank you so much my friend … :-)

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Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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