Mobile Addiction

Mobile Addiction

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Another mobile user 'bounced' off me the other day ... looking at it not the path!

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Mobile Addiction




Desensitising

Propensity to converse

Without human touch


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© 2019 Phill Oz O'fee


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Well said! So much electronic connection gained, so much human connection lost.

Hard to imagine that prior to the 1970's the mobile phone simply didn't exist and now there
are the best part of 5 billion of the things. How did the world ever manage. :))

Beccy.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love your use of the word in line one - perfect! Online communications of any kind are desensitizing & people completely forget about smiling & hugging & other signs of humanity when they jot their one-liners! There are ways to convey "human touch" in words, but people just don't do it! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Well said! So much electronic connection gained, so much human connection lost.

Hard to imagine that prior to the 1970's the mobile phone simply didn't exist and now there
are the best part of 5 billion of the things. How did the world ever manage. :))

Beccy.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this..although too short for such a valid point (I would have loved to read more) Your words are well chosen. Especially for the days we live in now.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a cleverness, Phill..

5:7:5 plus..

point perfect created !

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

as Rick Springfield sang..."we all need, the human touch"
i will never own a cell phone...
i like real contact....the face to face kind rather than the screen to screen kind.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Human touch is spot on - Thanks Jacob - agree entirely with your comments! :-)
So Very true it transcends the screen and bleeds into life and they seem to interpret the non digital response less and less accurately! Brilliant

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

I went into a café, sat down to sip a cup of tea and looked around - everyone accept one elderly la.. read more

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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