Nay Kindness in Whitewash'd Lies

Nay Kindness in Whitewash'd Lies

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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My attempt at a 'Sonnet' ... :-)

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Nay Kindness in Whitewash'd Lies




One doest oft findeth in the sooth of things

Bringeth heart ac'rbic m're than whisp'r'd lies

And which wounding shalt beest nay comf'rting

At which hour eith'r course couldst leaveth loveth to die


Shouldst not opaque beest love’s holdeth first to lasteth

And pure intent clasp tandem with promiseth

F'r chance secrets may ariseth from the past

And new whitewash'd lies soweth seeds dishonest


Beest not hasty to followeth thy heartstrings

Testeth all motives and seeketh chaste intention

F'r the sooth shall ascend on angel’s wings

Thus from amour th're is nay abstention


T is th'ref're a cleareth path of action

To beest honest in first love’s attraction


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2020


Original composition added:

No Kindness in Whitewashed Lies


One does often find in the truth of things

Bring heart acerbic more than whispered lies

And which wounding shall be no comforting

When either course could leave love to die

 

Should not opaque be love’s hold first to last

And pure intent clasp tandem with promise

For chance secrets may arise from the past

And new whitewashed lies sow seeds dishonest

 

Be not hasty to follow your heartstrings

Test all motives and seek chaste intention

For the truth will ascend on angel’s wings

Thus from amour there is no abstention

 

It is therefore a clear path of action

To be honest in first love’s attraction

© 2020 Phill Oz O'fee


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I hope you all like my efforts... :-)

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"...Be not hasty to follow your heartstrings
Test all motives and seek chaste intention
For the truth will ascend on angle's wings
Thus from amour there is no abstention..."

This is really really good.

Ps: I think you meant angel's wings and not angle's wings ;)

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Phill Oz O'fee

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Thank you very much for your kind review .. and pointing out my 'typo' error :-) ... yes angels inde.. read more



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"...Be not hasty to follow your heartstrings
Test all motives and seek chaste intention
For the truth will ascend on angle's wings
Thus from amour there is no abstention..."

This is really really good.

Ps: I think you meant angel's wings and not angle's wings ;)

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

1 Week Ago

Thank you very much for your kind review .. and pointing out my 'typo' error :-) ... yes angels inde.. read more

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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