Heart be Strong

A Poem by Chelsea (Jade)

Just one of those days without Evan that makes my heart ache to the point of pain.

Heart be breaking.

Heart be strong.

Don't let men string you along.

Some be ture.

Some be fake.

But my heart will be mine to break.

This shattering feeling in my chest

Is one to make all the rest.

let this feeling please be wrong

But for the love of God

Heart be Strong.

© 2010 Chelsea (Jade)

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GamingGal

Pros: Good rhyme scheme, helps it flow. And all the lines are pretty much the same length, which helps it flow too (in my opinion, that is. I can't stand for one line to be a lot longer than the rest).

Cons: None really.

Overall: A good poem that conveys the aching pain of the writer. Quite nice, if you ask me.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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ATG

A very well written and interesting poem about heart break. The poem gave a good sense of someone trying to move on after heart break. Overall, a good poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

GamingGal

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JC	reminds me of lyrics to an old blues song, or captain beefheart, i dig it. Posted 14 Years Ago reminds me of lyrics to an old blues song, or captain beefheart, i dig it.

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Added on January 14, 2010
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Chelsea (Jade)

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