You said I was your angel

You said I was your angel

A Poem by Aphy!
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A lot of empty promises and heartbreak made this beautiful piece

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You said I was your angel 
A treasure in the dark. 
I thought I was your everything 
And that I'd made my mark. 

You took my heart and crushed it, 
This torture can't be true. 
Still, when i think of happiness- 
I only think of you. 

A tiny part of what we had. 
In everything i see. 
It hurts to see you with her. 
With anyone but me. 

I thought i was your angel, 
A treasure in the dark. 
I'd kill to be your everything. 
Can't stand to be apart. 
I'm sure that it was love, 
I couldn't stop but fall. 
Pretty lies and empty words, 
Now I'm nothing at all. 

© 2015 Aphy!


Author's Note

Aphy!
Hope you can relate. Share your opinions...would really like to hear what you think. I THINK I SHOULD DO MORE POETRY...WHAT DO YOU THINK?
Happy reading
Aphy

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Very nice poem thanks for sharing your wonderful talent.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Everything you shared was alive in a haunting, beautiful sadness, Aphy. The movement and flow felt like a song, a music that faded into a dark place, the sunset of Love. xo

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aphy!

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words. Means a lot.
i had to come back and read this again :) it's so fantastic. I have a better appreciation for the rhymes and meters in this poem. it's really a beauty.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aphy!

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much buddy. And I'm glad u liked it hey :)
hhmm one of the better written pieces I have read on this site! I too can relate to several of those lines..
Cant wait to read more of your poetry Aphy!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aphy!

3 Years Ago

Aww thank you so much! I really appreciate it buddy. And I'm still working on something, be out soon
Powerful, emotional, easy reading and full of meaning! Love this poem!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aphy!

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. Glad u enjoyed it :)
Cyprian Van Dyke

3 Years Ago

You're most welcome! :)
I can relate to this... You write beautifully! Thanks for sharing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aphy!

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed it
This has a very beautiful flow, and is very relate-able, I am sure just about anybody could relate to this. Great job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aphy!

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Very simple but lovely..you should do more poetry..keep writing too

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aphy!

3 Years Ago

Thank u so much. I'm still working on my poetry but thanx for review
AH the fate of young love unrequited! I remember it well. You poem is simple, to the point and reads very well. Keep writing, and remember you are writing for your public!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aphy!

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much. And I'll most certainly keep that in mind.

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Added on October 8, 2015
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Aphy!

Pietermaritzburg, KZN, South Africa



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