Your Love Pains Me...

When loving someone hurts so bad

                                                Your love pains me

It puts me to shame

I can't even see

And somehow you're to blame

Your love scares me

I feel so terrified 

Petrified even

And it's you I blame

You make me love you

But sometimes it's me

Putting myself through

Situations you don't wanna see

Your love pains me

Makes me weak in the knees

I can never control myself

I don't think I'll ever stop

Loving you...

But through it all

Still..  

Your love pains me...

Author's Note

Yes...Another love poem. Bare with me I'm an emotional lovesick wreck at the moment (Sure you've noticed all my pieces have been about love loss and broken hearts) but I'm sure it'll pass...maybe...someday :(
Honest opinions please...just give it to me straight!!
Thank you

Reviews

[Not here]

it will pass i promise. great job on this poem, like all your others. I write lots of love poems as well. as long as you do them good (you do) nobody will complain, certainly not me :) fantastic

[Aphy!]

Hehe I think people will eventually get tired of hearing my soppy love stories hey :) But thank u so much

[Not here]

well i wont :)

[Johnny]

reminds me o some of the stuff I write, very good... it must be 95% of what I write about too but I love it! (Pun intended) we need more from you aphy!

[Aphy!]

Dominique! Thank you so much buddy, really means a lot. ❤ xx

[Johnny]

anytime love! xoxo

[neil]

the good thing about heart break is that it brings out the best of you
vocab- good
rhyme- excellent
emotion- pretty cool but could have been a bit deeper

[Aphy!]

Very true. I mean, the worst experiences shape us the most right?
Anyway, thank you for the lovely review

[MadalaJose]

Love is interesting. It brings out all kind of feelings and emotions from people. Nice piece

[Aphy!]

True words. Thanx buddy

[Rebecca Pall]

I really feel your emotion here. The battle that you kind of have with your own mind about the lover. Really great job.

[Aphy!]

Thank you. Much appreciated

[Rebecca Pall]

My pleasure. Be sure to check out my latest poem.

[Aphy!]

Will do hey

[Bluefire]

I like it, conflicting emotions.
"I can neither live with you, nor without you."
There's something unspeakable about this, that you have to feel it to truly understand it.
Well done!

[Aphy!]

Thank you so much. Hey. I got a way of expressing myself hey

[Bluefire]

You're welcome

[Dead]

You're a really really good writer!!!!! :)

[Aphy!]

Thank you so much. you too

[Devine Diva]

Very nice and i can relate. Yes love can make u blind sometimes and if your in too deep make you do foolish things like giving your heart back just for it to be ripped back apart

[Aphy!]

Very True hey. We as humans all struggle with love. Thank you so much for those words and taking your time to read my stuff. Glad you could relate and I hope you liked it.
Aphy

[TheLoversCheat]

I love when I can find writing that fits with me so well, when you can understand another person's pain because you both have been there.

[Aphy!]

Yes. We can all relate hey. Heartbreak is the worlds new unofficial language and sadly we all speak it. Thanx for the review!

[Emma]

Even when it hurts, we should tell ourselves that there is a reason for everything, we just sometimes can't see it.
Great job communicating the emotions.

[Aphy!]

Very true. Thank you so much