Black Pools Illuminated

Absinthe
A sinners
rotting teeth
Hollowed out bones
Famine
A vermins feast
A blood moon over a raging sea
132 lost,
angry beasts

Reviews

[Darkswing]

Quite the scenery! Loved how dark this is! You have an awesome imagination and a twisted way with words. Keep at it!

[costa siwale]

VIVID, TERSE, EXEMPLARY

these are
my few
words.
Awesome!

[emipoemi]

I like the imagery.....I like the musicality.....I don't know what to make of this, though......is it supposed to be absurd? It does elicit a bit of a chuckle.....but at the same time some fearful chills ("blood moon over a raging sea"....creepy). Well done!

[Ken Simm.]

A very 19th century Gallic feel to this that I like.

[Inda]

I like the tone of this one a lot, feels like an abrupt ending, but that may be because i wanted more to happen. great job!