Forever In A Drop Of Blood

Forever In A Drop Of Blood

A Poem by Phoenix

Can you see forever ? as it burns within my eyes;
do you dream of endless love ? to hide your deepest cries.
Do you stare out the midnight window ? looking into the abyss;
craving what you cannot find , the thrill of dark love's kiss.

If I told you that I loved you , would you drop on bended knee;
or would you see the pain of truth , and ask I set you free.
I can hold your heart in disarray , for as long as you may choose;
but only you would know the truth , and all that you could ever lose.

So I ask with but a single thought , where truths are like a grain of sand;
tell me what you most desire , ask of me what you demand.
I hold forever in a drop of blood , and you hold fate by me;
so who of us is truly lost ? maybe you will set me free.

© 2013 Phoenix


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I love how the words in the poem go smoothly together. I found that the poem was very attention grabbing and extremely interesting to read! I believe that you are a very talented writer!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I love the flow of this, and each line is just beautifully written. From the title to the last line, just awesome work. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Or would you see the pain of truth and ask I set you free...that line struck me deeply. You've done an excellent job! I love this!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Phoenix

6 Years Ago

thank you so much
wow deep and powerful, enjoyed

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Phoenix

6 Years Ago

thank u

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May redo Entered the Glare In Glass will be taking out a few other books since they are not doing so well on reviews. Till I know for sure there will be more readers to read them. But always going to .. more..

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