Im a King

It always makes me laugh when people act big a mighty, but they are really a chicken. so if it makes you laugh too i give you a virtual HIGH FIVE!!

Fiddle faddle fickle sauce
lookie here now I'm the boss
walking 'round with my chest puffed out
my thin white lips sneer up and shout
barking orders, taking names
my ego blows up with all this fame
but when the time comes
all shall see
I'm a chicken, not a king

Author's Note

ok now ive done some "serious" peoms, now its time to do some fun stuff, some of it might seem childish.....that's because it is hahaha. or is it? you decide! look hard and find the meanings in my writes, because they are there. but this one kinda has it stamped right on its forehead but i have a couple more i have to put up so look forward to more!

Reviews

[Indyinn]

I was waiting for "Chicken a la King", lol! Loved this!

[qaralynn]

lol..nice poem XD it's funny how people with the biggest mouth turn out to have a very low selfesteem most of the time...

[Kes]

Very nice. A troublesome truth hiding under that humour.
Nice one.

[Can't bring myself to d..]

OMG. this is the story of my life! it so deep and multi-layered. i cant even belive how amzing and deep these 9 lines are. i can just go on forever about how awesome this is

[Lilly]

Great humorous piece - nice work

[Dante Balsote]

This is a nice idea, Ethan! It really is hilarious when what the speaker here says is in the second person point of view ("you" or "he" instead of "I" or "me"). This is because those who have this puffed up egos don't even try to say something that would destroy their selves--so it's a bit awkward when it's in the first person point of view. Maintain the rhyme; it serves very well your humorous end. I guess this is your main strength. Keep it up! High five!

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

really a nice poem...i enjoyed reading it:)

[Katie]

I love it XD. It made me laugh and I still am!!!

[Revenge<3'sMe]

Lol this sounds a little like me, but I'm not a chicken> XD -highfives- Kepp it up!