My Dream World

A fictional poem about my dreams

When I dream from reality to imagination
When I float from my station
I dream of a place, my place to fall
My dream world, that I call
It's a magical place, filled with magical things
There is no law, no rules, and of course no kings
I frolic around all day and all night
With many new things and sights
But when I sleep in my dreams of imagination
I wake up in my station
So one day in reality, something occurd
It could destroy my dream world, that's absurd!
For I discovered sugar, it makes me unable to sleep
No matter how many times I count sheep
But then I saw something that could counter it out
It's being healthy, it can really shout
So then I went to bed and I slept really fast
I could sleep first and wake up last
So the moral to this poem if you are a fan
Is to dream a dream, whenever you can
So as you read this poem of all I fall
Think, are you in reality, or in a dream world you call

Reviews

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

i like it very much nice work ^^

[Silent Siren]

"When I dream from reality to imagination
When I float from my station
I dream of a place, my place to fall
My dream world, that I call
It's a magical place, filled with magical things
There is no law, no rules, and of course no kings
I frolic around all day and all night
With many new things and sights
But when I sleep in my dreams of imagination
I wake up in my station"


Until this point the poem is well done, and I like it! It gives a very lively mental image. However, from there on it kinda takes a silly turn... in my opinion.

[Daydreamer54]

But then I saw something that could counter it out
It's being healthy, it can really shout
So then I went to bed and I slept really fast
I could sleep first and wake up last
Ok i got confused here, but anyway i like the poem. it's very whimsical!