Love

This is a poem on bad relationships

Love... when faced to this creature you tend to give in
But... when the creature leaves, you don't want to win
Why... is it you fight when things don't do good
And... you don't do things for each other, when you should
This... is the cause of depression of things going wrong
This... is why many people sing songs
And... the depression goes so far
Why... it's just that reason for many bars
But... there is still hope to make things right
Love... the only cure to make the blind gain sight

Reviews

[E. L. Foley]

I like the comparison of love to a creature, very original.