The Calm

The Calm

A Poem by B
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When raging winds roar
Upon a million starry shores

After the solemn pair drifts away
Touching sands of white all remains

Through her soft hair the rhythm goes
A place of no drugs floats through

While a seeing eye presumes too much
Some calm seems to visit this temple

A soul accepting tears of the sun
Relaying the paradise of this mind

Another way to life mediates the tide
To welcome all the ravishing fruit

Kind in it's giving color it may fly
Holding a prayer for mercy upon his soul

A coconut recline in his beautiful eyes
Kissing away the tears to a Tahiti

She is the summering hour taking a stroll
Left if the egoistic tick of time 

Beyond the strings of wooden oak 
Behind the fluttering toes sand dilates 

Away you go into her peace
Calming the tame of regular sight  

© 2017 B


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Very nicely written.
It takes your mind to a serene, peaceful, yet somewhat sad place.
Thank you for sharing
Resa. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


B

2 Years Ago

Thank you resa :)
NICE THANKS FOR SHARING YOU TALENTS.

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you 😊
"She is the summering hour taking a stroll
Left if the egoistic tick of time...." this line and the image drove it home for me. i love this

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you Dear Sonnie
meditative, mystical and serene in the reading ... you know how i enjoy this style of yours ..especially like the pairing of wind, stars and tides .. and "A coconut recline in his beautiful eyes" is delightful ... another keeper my friend!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you E
Again, positive message, and positive direction.

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much
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Very beautiful and calm. After reading i feel so happy. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much
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4 Years Ago

You wellcome . I realy like it.
I do believe my toes have sand between them, and I desperately thirst for a drink with an umbrella in it! A most lovely repose, destined to transport the calmest of muses!

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kelly .... blushing here
Kelly Scheppers

4 Years Ago

I love the euphoric joy of your avatar - balloons and the beach, what a thrill!
B

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much
this definitely had a south pacific island feel captured nicely through verse and the photo helps.

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

I went to Australia yesterday for half an hour
Tried to imagine how it would feel to be there.. read more
andrew mitchell

4 Years Ago

30 minutes to see australia
B

4 Years Ago

lol ... and who said we need planes lol
a touching write,really enjoyed

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thanks Wordman
I really love this poem. It is relaxing to me just to read it as I think what turmoil I feel in my live at times and seeing the peace you have in this writing brings me piece in return.

Well Done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thanks HL ............

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