No Inhibitions

No Inhibitions

A Poem by B

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If it could be spoken
Ropes attaching hope ties to life

You are the pink requiem 
The greatness of morning haze of purity

If one word would hold you
The shades of simple beauty in grey

Surrounding your warm being 
There exists a gentle place 

Romanticizing yet another substance 
The air of thirst to those eyes

© 2017 B


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Powerful strings of metaphors.
An apt display of your artistic mind.
Good Job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


B

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your support
Your thoughts breathe a certain enchantment over the world's existence. Beautiful shades on every soft petal of life and a joy to read, again and again.

Posted 6 Years Ago


B

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review
An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

Always a joy.
Beauty is indeed in the eye of the beholder. That gentle place can come in a wide range of colors or simply monochromatic shades of grey. I like this very much.

Posted 6 Years Ago


B

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dave
High appraisal and testimony to a love serene !

Beautifully penned!

Posted 6 Years Ago


B

6 Years Ago

Thank you Tom
I love the picture with the poem. Your line "shades of simple beauty in grey" I love how it shows we don't need vibrant colors to see beauty. It is in the shades of life we should take solace.

Well Done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


B

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much H.L.
That is true
This feels like an open letter to a loved one.
Like the gentle breeze feel to it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


B

6 Years Ago

Thanks Paul
this reminds me of a writer on this site...she is the epitome of gentleness and kindness...

i like the "pink requiem" line very much...
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


B

6 Years Ago

Thank you J so sweet

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Added on May 30, 2017
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