Petals of a Lazy Daisy

Reaching out it's roots through sombrero shade

Delicately petals whistle through a breeze

Bravely shy to the touch slowly turning

Searching for the morning smiles of this sun

Slowly it curves beyond the translucent bend

Resting on waters falling through height

Holding closely its winter stories in hidding

Gifting a painting of softly spoken words

Laying gently on the ground flourishing with light

Known so little of nature's might abandoned in innocence

Counting layers playing petals to sheers of colour

In dunes of dew escaping a harsh rapture

Kissing a lover's lips done tandem rememberance

Together they dance a silent waltz to no audience

Nude in shades of yellowy past they pass

Glistening in the baffled forms of being alive

Hugging away all forms of desolation

The petals of a lazy daisy  

Reviews

[yuhee]

Extremely beautiful work. It's as if the flower is so very alive. Made my day.

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Thank you MP

[Andre Waters II]

This was heartwarming and well needed. This willbe kept in the favorites. Beautiful picture to match the poem adequately.

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Thank you Andre

[George Coombs]

A lovely image which gently compliments your gently sensitiv writing. The daisy is such a frail and beautiful flower in natural ligh tjust beautiful writing and a pleasure to read

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Thank you George

[George Coombs]

Your Welcome

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Each line oozes the gentle fragrance of romance in the midst of the field of life where one flower falls in love with another to blossom together as flowers of one field, petals touching petals in germinating the spark of their love ... Superbly, contemplatively, moving and inspiring ...

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Thank you so much Marvin

[Tom]

Fine depiction of a diminutive yet beautiful flower, captivating imagery, kudos!

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Thank you so much Tom

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful Beautiful x love this

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Thank you so much

[Ken Simm.]

Now this is the kind of floral tribute I like. Excellent.

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Thank you so much Ken

[andrew mitchell]

yes the beauty of nature is but fleeting moments to capture and adore. nice write nisreen.

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Thank you Andrew