Galactic Breathe

Brisky sky blue life against a veiling sky

Blaming vector spaces between two 

Seducing elixir of sweet red wine 

By the waist taken for stands

Upon the waves of air May would rest

Repeating some chantings of kohl nights

Standing by destinies you may have placed

A feather descends in sheer respect

As salutations rise to your sky level 

Heavenly warm breasts of giving spree

Spun around earth in such rounds of thrice

Showering midnight stares with photographic glitter

A sheer gown of starry flight translucence

Read the words written would you onto lined palm trees

Scriptures would redeem moments much once lost

You would glow in the sand grains of distance

As a peaceful moment rests upon limbs

Fingers releasing a known fragrant spirit of oud

On the right corner of a gulf of memories

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

This is rather deep.
Conjures up a lost one.
Certainly someone close, and missed.
Like the way you bring them back to yourself.
Good memories.

[B]

I have one
About him

[H.L. Cerveise]

Such beautiful phrases in every line you are great at painting pictures in my mind. I love the line "A sheer gown of starry flight translucence."

Well Done!

[B]

Thank you HL

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that photographic glitter, it remembers...and all the peaceful moments...we conjure those in times of pain and grief...to act as buffers like the clouds between us and the sky...

j.

[B]

Thank you J ..... my work is becoming more abstract than normal

[Sami Khalil]

Those spaces between the two can spread out or tighten up. They can create islands or gulfs. Very nice...:)............

[B]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................