Suspended

The shade of pink

In twilight bay

Claims of a night

Given away

Whispers a full moon

Dancing a light of hope

Skipping a beat of life

Kneeling to a close

Lucky stars

Waiting afar

Starting a thin line

Lover of the night

Ridden in thought

Whether late 

Tempered to time

Celebrated glows 

Gratitude in love

Endearments of a heart

Shaping yellow cards

Cherishing cherry red

Made to last

A Chance to stay

Through midday

Walking a certain high

Shining line

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

What we have here is a series of couplets, seemingly unrelated, but taken as a whole, cleaving to the theme of romantic love. They might be thoughts of, or descriptions of, the lovers. It could also be impressions of the occurrences of a single romantic evening.

[barleygirl]

This must be how it feels for those who can turn off the noise in their heads & just feel the sparkling synchronicity of a moment spent with someone who shares magic similarly. I wish I was better at reaching this point of being suspended . . . not needing to do anything but soak it in. I love your graceful details like flower petals suggesting a path thru your words, but not insisting on anything in particular (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[B]

Thank you Barleygirl

[LylaCrystal]

Suspended above the world in the threads of love, tended by colours and nature. It's the sense of connection that resist no matter the obstacles. I loved it! :)

[B]

Thank you Lyla

[Pete]

this is just beautiful. takes one's breath away. like being on cloud 9 of love. no better feeling that you so wonderfully capture ... :)

[B]

Thank you pete

[Robert Trakofler]

I feel like your speaking of a distant love whether it is miles or the mind it is a feeling that bleeds thru to my sympathy or empathy maybe a bit of both but those longing lines ring a familiar true tone to me. calling a spectrum of joy in an ethereal embrace

[B]

Thanks BB for your review

[Aurora]

Took me to an endless skyline. Beautifully summed up.

[B]

Thank you Aurora

[Chris Shaw]

Warmth and hope in your words that anticipate romance.. You give the reader much imagery. There is both colour and emotion in your writing. Nicely penned. All good wishes.

Chris

[B]

Thank you Chris

[Weeping willow]

Beautifully expressed words flowing through your poem, filled with emotions ;-]

[B]

Thank you :)
Very much

[Dara]

Beautiful words filled with hope of lasting love and creating a rainbow of emotions in colors of pink, yellow and cherry red. Very lovely and so very romantic!

[B]

Thank you dear Dara !

[lightsong]

full with romance... anticipations of love through the upcoming night, I specially loved Your fist two lines, a gorgeous image and for me it was as if You took that pink ray from the countless ones and wrote the poem about it, it means that the pink ray express the joining of two lovers from the many other lovers (rays), lovely words of joy and happiness, a celebration of two hearts becoming one.

[B]

Thanks Light
I think your review should take the spotlight
Beautiful !!

[lightsong]

Your poem is the "beautiful" my friend, my review was just the reaction of it ;)