Moonlight

Moonlight

A Poem by VolvoLife
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A poem about the Moonlight

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Moonlight

The moon shines bright

With its mysterious light.

It covers the sky.

So peacefull and shy.

No cloud can be seen.

No colour, no green.

That"s what I feel.  

© 2009 VolvoLife


Author's Note

VolvoLife
ignore grammar problems.

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I love it...it flows wonderfully
Great Job

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice.
Easy to read and enjoyable.

Side Note:
If you are a Brit (or at least use their spelling system) you might want to say so in your Bio so people won't "get on to you" for spelling differences. *smile*

Posted 14 Years Ago


The "no green" makes no sense to me, but the rest is pretty good. I was did not pay attention too much, but there were no grammar misspellings, I think. Keep up the good job!
Greetz

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 6, 2009

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VolvoLife
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Hey. I am just a simple person. I like to read, well, this is my hobby. I like to write about romance, about feelings or fantasy stuff. I like to have friends, to joke. I can not live without that. I .. more..

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