"Life is your dream"

"Life is your dream"

A Poem by Po3tByH3art
"

Life is in your hands and it is on you to make it right.

"

Not to far from

the other side;

as the nights go by

the days just

seem to fly by.

 

You wonder

what is next

where does

the road

lead you,

 

will you do right

and keep it lie free

and be true.

 

The road usually

has it's bumps

so it's best to fill those

holes,

be a success

in life and reach

your ultimate goals.

 

Travel the long path

try and remain on the tracks,

but the skills and brain is what some lacks.

 

Life is razor sharp

like a blade, and slowly

but surely the light

 just fades..

© 2012 Po3tByH3art


Author's Note

Po3tByH3art
I wrote this with my mind soaring freely so let me know what you think, please comments thanks!!

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I like this one a lot more! Hope you dont mind but Im gonna re structure it here lol imagine it centered. If it upsets you feel free to delete my review :)~ I just think structure makes the work easier to read and makes it stand out more. Hope Im not pushing it but I removed a word or two. Please let me know what you think.

Not to far from
the other side;
as the nights go by
the days just
seem to fly.

You wonder
what is next
where does
the road
lead you,

Will you do right
and keep it lie free
and be true.

The road usually
has it's bumps
so it's best to fill
those holes,
be a success
in life and reach
your ultimate goals.

Travel the long path
try and remain on the tracks,
but the skills and brain
are what some lack.

Life is razor sharp
like a blade, and slowly
but surely the light
just fades.





Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I actually like this alot It does look well structured like that :) your not being mean at all just helping

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this one a lot more! Hope you dont mind but Im gonna re structure it here lol imagine it centered. If it upsets you feel free to delete my review :)~ I just think structure makes the work easier to read and makes it stand out more. Hope Im not pushing it but I removed a word or two. Please let me know what you think.

Not to far from
the other side;
as the nights go by
the days just
seem to fly.

You wonder
what is next
where does
the road
lead you,

Will you do right
and keep it lie free
and be true.

The road usually
has it's bumps
so it's best to fill
those holes,
be a success
in life and reach
your ultimate goals.

Travel the long path
try and remain on the tracks,
but the skills and brain
are what some lack.

Life is razor sharp
like a blade, and slowly
but surely the light
just fades.





Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 16, 2012
Last Updated on March 17, 2012
Tags: Poem, truth, success, life, poetry, rhyme

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Po3tByH3art
Po3tByH3art

Monticello, NY



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My name Is Jorge I am 22 years old. I have been writing Poetry since the 7th grade which is about 10 years but on and off until about 3 years ago since then been writing alot lately to free my mind. I.. more..

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