Broken on the Inside...

Can't you see I'm broken on the inside

Don't you ever wonder why

I am always alone and crying at night 

Don't you care, or are you really that blind

That I'm invisible to your sight

But maybe I am better off alone

And going about completely unknown

For even if you spoke to me I would never reply

Because I am broken on the inside...

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

sometimes, ev'n the lover of life's so fruitless at listening to the call of one's heart ... no matter how loudly we speak or chant or shout at the world. very heartfelt poetry once again. written with deep aches of your life. bless you!

[Tori Jones]

Bless you too!

[...]

Sounds to me ver mellodic. Flowing of the words and even pain . Can have beautiful sound. you made it well. from pain create something realy beautiful.

[Tori Jones]

Thx, for reviewing...