Being Alone

Being Alone

A Poem by Tori Jones

Being alone is hard and sad
You feel like nothing compared to others
If you weren't alive everyone would be glad
And you think
Am I really that bad
That I deserve to be alone
Being alone is painful
It makes you depressed and weak
Fears hidden behind your fake smile 
People think you're happy
But really you're just hiding the pain
From being left alone in the rain
Being alone results in pain...

© 2016 Tori Jones


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"Being alone results in pain". You know, I used to hate solitude because it only reminded me that the people I've lost will never come back. Now, I sort of relish in it. Although, I do understand these emotions. No one's deserves to suffer alone, that's for sure. But, this pain is only temporary. How you choose to overcome this depression determines how your future will lay out. What may seem bleak now could possibly be wonderful later on. I should know. So, don't succumb to this.

Still, this was beautiful! Also, your icon reminds me of someone... You don't happen to know someone called ILovePoetry?

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tori Jones

4 Years Ago

I'm going out, I will talk to you later...
Sapientiam

4 Years Ago

Goodbye! Wonderful job, again!
Tori Jones

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
such an emotional read, very well written and & expressed.
Pain of any sort stinks.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tori Jones

4 Years Ago

yes, thx for the review

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Tori Jones
Tori Jones

Mansfield, OH



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