Evolution

Evolution

A Poem by Siveti

Time nailed down like a harness
For our human ways
To push and pull through the darkness
For heavens above
The animals thump their chests
Monkey see monkey do

© 2021 Siveti


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Your poem speaks to me of how foolish humans can be to dismiss animals as being "beneath" us! We act in so many animalistic ways! (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Siveti

2 Years Ago

ook, hoo hoo hoo hoo, oo oo oo
Siveti

2 Years Ago

Maybe we have forgotten we are animals, and this leads to us being foolish.
We aren't far away from the monkeys and we still show many of our forebears behaviours. Only a veneer of civilisation separates us from the chimps. Thanks for your thought provoking poem.
Oo Oo,
Alan

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Siveti

2 Years Ago

ook, hoo hoo hoo hoo, oo oo oo
alanwgraham

2 Years Ago

Ha ha Oo Oo ook Oo oo

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Added on September 30, 2021
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Siveti
Siveti

United Kingdom



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