A Poem by several thousand

Shipping those two
Together they are
Amazing and romantic
Roars and sighs
Simply happy
Holding in
Incredible patience
Perhaps someday
Sailing away

© 2018 several thousand

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You can really read between the lines. I love it. Says a lot more than there is written. :)
But I'm biased, it's my dream to sail away, or fly away, or something similar with someone someone. ;)

Posted 1 Year Ago

Sorta kinda reminds me of an online "relationship"... perhaps someday realized.

I love your word economy. Sometimes that can be the hardest thing to achieve when writing good poetry.

And this was definitely good poetry.

Posted 1 Year Ago

So much imaginary just in short! Love 'em!
And you're profile is great...Proper sundae😀!!

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on June 17, 2018
Last Updated on June 17, 2018