Hold Me in Your Heart

Hold Me in Your Heart

A Poem by Melinda McQueen

A day dream

To be felt, though unseen.
A wish of the soul
To be known.

 

Tell me your secrets

And I shall never forget.

For you are my start,

Hold me in your heart.

 

Keep me safe

In every breath you take.

For if you ceased to be,

You would take love from me.

 

Look inside,

And love for you, will you find.

In your life I want to be apart,

Hold me in your heart.

 

Let me know

All the beauty you bestow.

Baby, dance with me a timeless dance

While we have the chance.

 

Through time and space,

Let us take our love away.

As two souls ignite a spark,

Hold me in your heart.

© 2015 Melinda McQueen


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Gee
Neat write Melinda,touching,sweet,romantic,etc,etc

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and leaving your review
Beautiful and kind words in the poem.
"Through time and space,
Let us take our love away.
As two souls ignite a spark,
Hold me in your heart."
The lines above. Perfect for the gift of love. Thank you Melinda for sharing your excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome Melinda.
a very touching write...

j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

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I always love hearing your soul speak Melinda.
Such a pleasure and honor as always.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

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Melinda; You write from the heart and it's so sweet. Whoever he is, where he may be, he would be so lucky to read this lovely poem. I enjoyed it very much. To be loved is to be Held within someone's heart, and I love the title. I love it all but this is my favorite stanza:
Tell me your secrets
And I shall never forget.
For you are my start,
Hold me in your heart.
As two souls ignite a spark, Hold me in your heart. Beautiful!! Thank you so much...Dale

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

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Confuser

4 Years Ago

You're welcome Melinda....d
'Dance with me a timeless dance'. It's the most beautiful line. Nicely written.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review.
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dan
A poem that crossed my computer screen like a mellow summer evening breeze, love in all of its gentle splendor, a gift for all of your readers. I, as one, thank you for sharing it with me. take care...dan

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review.
The title of this write explains it all. Nice one. Valentine

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review.
another great write but, with grammatical errors!
4th stanza line 2 needs a comma after the first you or the second you
3 a part

Last stanza line 3 as two souls ignite a spark

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thanks for your help!!!!!!!! :)
Very Beautiful and expressing words


Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review.

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Melinda McQueen
Melinda McQueen

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Hello, I'm Melinda from Texas. I am a published author. I'm in a chair with Cerebral Palsy and writing is my outlet. I have found deep pleasure in writing poetry. Writing helps me express my emotion.. more..

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