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Loving You With My Life

Loving You With My Life

A Poem by Melinda McQueen

Though I stumble and fall

Flat on my face,

I hear You call

Through the rain.

 

I lift my head

As Your grace I find.

You have brought me from the dead,

And I’m loving You with my life.

 

Your comfort surrounds

And embraces me.

Your love astounds

And sets me free.

 

Let there be a spark

In these eyes of mine.

I’ve left the dark,

Loving You with my life.

 

Lord, how could I not?

For You have done so much.
My sustaining Rock,

In Whom I trust.

 

Your conquering devotion

Is a roaring tide.

As a never-ending ocean,

You loved me with Your life.

© 2015 Melinda McQueen


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dan
Melinda, Once again I don't feel qualified to analyze the religious tone of the piece, but the writing is effective in conveying the message you'd like the reader to grasp and, in your case, cling to in order to improve their outlook on life. Nicely done. take care...dan

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by! God bless.
A wonderful praise poem to our Lord and Savior. Thank you Melinda for speaking out Valentine

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by! God bless.
Thank you Jesus!
Thanks for sharing your amazing poetry:)
B-blessed...

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Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your visit. God bless.
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Gee
Beautifully written Melinda............

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your visit. God bless.
this sounds like a great song melissa

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your visit. God bless.
If nothing else your writes are a reminder to me and others of the strength we need in life.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your visit. God bless.
This is an up-lifting poem and has a feel goodness all about it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your visit. God bless.
The poem is beautiful. You led the reader to place of safety. Easy to get lost. We need the forgiveness and place we can know we are loved and safe.
"Your conquering devotion
Is a roaring tide.
As a never-ending ocean,
You loved me with Your life."
The ending words. True and need to be understood. Thank you Melinda for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melinda McQueen

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your visit. God bless.
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome Melinda.

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Added on August 15, 2015
Last Updated on August 15, 2015
Tags: God, Jesus, Faith, Glory, Poem

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Melinda McQueen
Melinda McQueen

TX



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Hello, I'm Melinda from Texas. I am a published author. I'm in a chair with Cerebral Palsy and writing is my outlet. I have found deep pleasure in writing poetry. Writing helps me express my emotion.. more..

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