Treasures Unseen

Treasures Unseen

 

A thousand tears

Upon a thousand fears.

A peace needing revealed,

A dream needing instilled.

 

The heart realizes

What the mind disguises.

For it knows the truth…

Treasures unseen, more than a few.

 

A light shines from the creases

Even though the heart is in pieces.

A gleam of hope, an ounce of faith
Is all one dream needs to remain.

 

A thought, a memory

Entitles it to be.

Everlasting desire to succeed…

Treasures unseen.

 

A constant friend

In times when darkness seeps in,

Reminding of its presence,

Never to end.

 

What if dreams are forever caught

In a golden vault?

What if tears were the key

To treasures unseen.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem.
"A thought, a memory
Entitles it to be.
Everlasting desire to succeed…
Treasures unseen."
You gave enough to make the reader think and ponder. Many kinds of treasures. Thank you dear Melinda for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks for your review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Melinda.

[E G TEN]

Hello Mel, treasures of love & memories we keep closed to our
heart giving us all the reason to live life as we dream it to be.
Your poetry is kind and its lovely to read, very cool Thanks EG

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Valentine]

One of the greatest treasures is love, and it doesn't have to cost one penny. Valentine

[Melinda McQueen]

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[dan]

Treasure has many guises, whether they be monetary, emotional, spiritual or others. This piece touches on a few, expressed in various shapes and tones. The fact that this piece touches so many enigmatic permutations makes it a very complete theme, descriptive and thought-provoking. Very nice piece of writing! take care...dan

[Melinda McQueen]

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[wordman]

then most of us would be millionaires

[Melinda McQueen]

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[A hare off]

This poem is beautiful, it really makes the reader think. Very nice.

[Melinda McQueen]

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