"Sadness"

Reviews

[Frieda P]

You touched a chord with this one, and then I read Kahlil Gibran, that clinched it for me. I've been reading him since I was a kid. My favorite was always, 'Speak to me of Children' of course as a rebellious teen, I used to repeat it whenever possible and it would infuriate my parents. 'Your children are not your children,
they are the sons and daughters of life's longing for itself. They come through you but are not you and though they are with you, they do not belong you to. Wow, I think I still remembered it, if that's right. Anyway, back to sadness, very profound and you nailed it! Thanks for reminding me how much I love Kahlil, I need to visit him again soon. Lovely read.

[Night]

....and the soul is stirred to remembrance...thank you Frieda and you're welcome...:)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, I always love a read that stirs any emotion in me.

[KAOlmsted]

The words that follow the quote were, for me, better than the quote that inspired the piece. Well done, this. A topic to which everyone can relate, in some way or another. Thank you for baring your soul for us in this beautifully heart-breaking piece.

-kimmer

[Night]

...you're very welcome, and thank you.:)

[KAOlmsted]

Always my pleasure.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Beautiful David and yes I understand this completely and I pray that one day your sadness will be wiped away by the tender arms of love.

[Night]

...thank you.:)

[Time's The Bond]

Sadness is everywhere.

[Night]

I saw the sadness just the other day...:)

[LA Lorena]

a most poignant and tender write. sadness is something everyone can relate to, as we all experience it to some degree during our lifetime.

[Night]

...thank you Lorena...and Good morning to you.:)

[LA Lorena]

would be better if someone were fetching me a refill of coffee

[Be myself!]

Very true and real to most people. You did a good job

[Night]

...thanks.:)

[The Dreamer]

A place of bitter sweet memories
i loved that line -the greatest sadness is when you lose something you loved, when memories that where once sweet becomes bitter.
and i loved the last para too - we always feel the most for ourselves, even if someone else's sadness is more than ours...

[Night]

...true dat my friend...thanks for the read...:)

[rnuff]

deep piece, yes I think the saddest part in every human, the sadness that touches the heart and the gut. Nicely done!

[Night]

...thank you Shorty, God bless.:)