"Loves Desire"

...Inspired by a lovely friend of mine...Carolann.

I saw the vision clearly

it stayed with me awhile

 Though my soul was weary

I found myself with smile.

It seemed but just a dream

This vision from afar

And in my heart was seen

The brightness of a star.

 Like the stars that shine

Forever gems of fire

So in this heart I find

A light of loves desire.

Night.2013

Author's Note

...inspired by and written for a very beautiful and talented woman, my lovely friend Carolann. Without her light this world would be a darker place...Night.2013

Reviews

[Frieda P]

How is anyone supposed to concentrate with that photo up there is what I want to know?! mmmm, anyway, I thought your last poem I read of yours was for her, thanks for setting me straight. ;-)

Very sweet, compassionate and strong, much like yourself David.

[Night]

Awe Frieda, you're a gem...i'm really starting to like you..lol.

[Frieda P]

hahahah NO not that! ;-P

[Night]

...lol. You're such a nut...:)

[Frieda P]

I can deal with that, been called worse. :-D

[Georgia Gypsy]

What a lovely tribute!
Thanks for sharing.

GG

[Night]

...thank you very much...:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is really beautiful and captivating just like the lady you wrote it about.

[Night]

...thank you my friend...:)

[DIVYA]

A very heartwarming tribute to an amazing friend. She is lucky to have you as a friend! I am touched by the simplicity and beauty with which it is written.

[Night]

...thank you...:)

[Be myself!]

I like this poem. Very well writen.

[Night]

...well thank you very much...:)

[Be myself!]

Your welcome

[LA Lorena]

A sweet write Mr. Night. She must be a wonderful friend to inspire such lovely words.

[Night]

...she is, thank you very much.:)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Very touching and honest!
Beautiful

[Night]

Hello my friend, it's good to see you...and much thanks for your kind words

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you for writing

[Night]

...my pleasure.

[KAOlmsted]

Very sweet, this.

[Night]

thank you kimmer, may I call you kimmer.?

[KAOlmsted]

Not only may you call me kimmer, I'm afraid I am going to have to insist *laugh* My pleasure, David.

[Night]

...way cool...lol. Thanks.:)

[KAOlmsted]

;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is beautiful. The light of loves desire lit from afar. So romantic and full of love.

[Night]

...and so it is my beautiful friend...this poem was written about you...you have such a beautiful light within you...it shines so bright...so much love...:)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you so much David, I'm honoured that wrote something so beautiful about me. :)

[Asilem]

This is so sweet! I love your tattoo collection by the way.

[Night]

...lol. Thanks.