I Dream / A Dream / In Sleep

3 Haikus

 

I Dream

Sleepless and lovelorn

wishful pining for the truth,

hoping vividly.

 

A Dream

To keep promises

enthusiastic as war,

men at last needless...

 

In Sleep

cradled in silence

a loud mind coelesces

with the universe.

Reviews

[s y e]

One word: A-MAZING!
I loved it. Its short but really effective.

[Nicole]

wow, I really like this.
Short, but really powerful..
I Dream...
A Dream..
In Sleep.
Definate. Its definate. This is a favorite. :D

[Ed Hart]

it is one thing to put the syllables in their rows...that's like putting your shoes on correctly; but to fill the lines with meaning grown ripe, where sweet understanding shines through, that's the hi in your haiku...

[Butch Decatoria]

thank you so much for that review.