POsitive rap

POsitive rap

A Poem by RIch Hilliard

Finally a positive rap song


Ideas they be coming dawg never do they stop

So I think I'll be thinking my way all the way to the top

Thinking of some more ways to gather up some guap

You know I'll be successful working till I drop


5 deep breaths put ya mind at ease

Thinking of the tropics with a nice cool breeze

Bless ya self dawg you aint gotta sneeze

And don't forget to pray get down on your knees 


My flow it be positive call it proton

And yes I be listening so go on

Talk about your life, problems and so on

Watch Dr. Phil man turn his show on


Eat your fruits veggies and more lean meats

That way you'll be kickin more mean beats

Stay away from drugs and lay off the sweets

Get ya a*s in collge and stay off the streets


© 2011 RIch Hilliard

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XDD this is cute :)
I loved the flow :)
Great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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This was a great suprise. This would be fantastic if schools got kids involved in focusing on the positive. This is brilliant, thanks for sharing x

Posted 12 Years Ago


Posted 12 Years Ago

I pulled out the inner gangster when I read this and thoroughly enjoyed myself.:) It has a great rhyme, beat, flow, all combined with a positive message. My favorite stanza is the last, replacing just one word I would rap this to kids I nanny. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Even if I was not in the music business, I really dug this as a message given is one of positive....ness

Posted 12 Years Ago

A very true and positive rap. Take the bad road. You will land in a bad place. Education and no drugs is the way to a good life. Strong words and story made this a outstanding poem. Thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Very good i like the flow.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I sang it like a rap and it was fantabulous. Perfect rap material..Good lyrics, great rhythm..Good job Rich

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on January 17, 2011
Last Updated on January 17, 2011


RIch Hilliard
RIch Hilliard

Pittsburgh, PA

Hi im a young poet. more..


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