Through Other Eyes

Through Other Eyes

A Poem by Raivyn

I see these people

Day by day

I watch them go

About their way

Sometimes I wonder

How they seem not to stress

When this world is chaotic

It is such a mess

As they see the look

Upon the faces

Of the homeless and hungry

In all different places

Their faults will be shown

As they've never known

The kinds of people

This world disowns

But they will see

and recognize

They'll view the world

Through other eyes

© 2008 Raivyn


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Very nice poem. Makes you think!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a melancholy, however beautiful
look at the world through the eyes of
strangers.

An exceptional poem, a unique, singular
look at the world and delve into the
underworld where most people never go.

An exhibition of great talent and clever
writing ---- brilliant !

Thank you ! More Please.

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Raivyn
Raivyn

Middletown, PA



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Hellew, I'm 19.. Wiccan.. A smartass... D&D Nerd.. etc etc.. Not gonna waste time spilling my guts about myself. If you're truly interested you can message me. Otherwise, hope you enjoy my writing! more..

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A Poem by Raivyn