forced

forced

A Poem by Tendencies

 im not with you anymore

yet you still control me

i dont want to deal with this anymore

i left you

so i could be myself

so i could do what i want

now you are forcing me to do

what you want

i will keep my promise for now

but

i wont know you forever

i wont always be with in your grasp

then

i will be me

© 2008 Tendencies


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This is a short but strong piece. It's hard to leave and then still be under that person's control. Then, when you finally do decide to end it forever, it becomes hard to leave. I was in that situation, but it soon started killing me, literally. I had to get out. And yet he still expects me to be at his every beck and call.

Great write. Thanks for sharing...

Josie

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a short but strong piece. It's hard to leave and then still be under that person's control. Then, when you finally do decide to end it forever, it becomes hard to leave. I was in that situation, but it soon started killing me, literally. I had to get out. And yet he still expects me to be at his every beck and call.

Great write. Thanks for sharing...

Josie

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tendencies
Tendencies

Fountain Inn, SC



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