Brand New

Brand New

A Poem by *~Poetic_Essence~*

 

                    Brand New
 
I hate to hear about who you’ve been with
And what you did with this girl and that one
I wonder is anything I’m doing brand new?
Did she touch you like this, or kiss you like that?
Did she move like that, or squeeze you like this?
I feel like I’m in a contest with your past
Is anything I’m doing brand new?
 
We have been together for a while now
Each time I feel like I’m competing with myself
Is anything I’m doing brand new?
Baby tell me your fantasies
So I can fulfill each and everyone
I hate the thought of you being used to me
That’s why I want every time to feel brand new.

© 2008 *~Poetic_Essence~*


Author's Note

*~Poetic_Essence~*
Im in competition with myself...is anythin i'm doin brand new?

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Never feel like you have to compete for a man's affections. This piece feels very real. If you are being held to clips of memories he isnt comparing you to a person but to pieces of experiences. Dont decide to split yourself into like experiences because he will never see you as a person. Its ok to hold your expectations towards someone instead of them towards you. I respect this piece. Individual love is to be appreciated for what it is in it own unique wrapper

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I like this very much. You capture your situation very well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Never feel like you have to compete for a man's affections. This piece feels very real. If you are being held to clips of memories he isnt comparing you to a person but to pieces of experiences. Dont decide to split yourself into like experiences because he will never see you as a person. Its ok to hold your expectations towards someone instead of them towards you. I respect this piece. Individual love is to be appreciated for what it is in it own unique wrapper

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Me being only 16, I can't fully relate to this poem but being someone in a relationship, I undstand where you're coming from, I feel the same way sometimes. Nicely written too, I really enjoy your writting.
-Hope

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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I am 21 years old...I have been writing since I was in middle-school, I write because when there is no one else to listen to my pain, Pen and Paper always hear me..lol..I feel as if poetry is not what.. more..

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