~COTTON CANDY AND BUTTERFLIES~

~COTTON CANDY AND BUTTERFLIES~

A Poem by Jillian Alexis
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I entered this poem in the...CuteNCuddly... contest. It was fun to write. I hope you all enjoy reading it.

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~COTTON CANDY AND BUTTERFLIES~

 

Tucked softly beneath her blanket’s,

on a snowy, white Christmas Eve;

A child of five, closes her eye’s,

as slowly she drifts off to sleep.

She finds herself on a billowy Cloud,

which is floating among a blue Sky;

It’s as cuddly as her stuffed Teddy Bear,

and as soft as a Baby’s first sigh.

A Rainbow floats beside the child,

it’s beauty can not be described;

She reaches her hand out to touch it,

as another soft Cloud passes by.

They remind her of Cotton Candy,

for they’re soft and as light as air;

She snuggles up with her blankie,

cradling it with great care.

A Blue Bird flies above the Cloud,

singing a soft Lullaby;

A Butterfly flaps it’s colorful wing’s,

then dissappears in the Sky.

In the distance she hears a voice,

which is softly calling to her ;

She slowly awakens from her dream,

clutching her Teddy Bear's fur.

 

© 2008 Jillian Alexis


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beautiful and calming...

Posted 14 Years Ago


A lovely childrens poem...

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is such a beautiful, heartfelt poem with beautiful imagery. I love the way this piece of writing flows so smoothly. It's also very rich with colorful descriptions. Masterfully written.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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It's beautiful.
I love it.

Lovelove-Jamie

Posted 15 Years Ago


Simply Beautiful!

Posted 15 Years Ago


What a beautiful ethereal flow to this poem. You write like an angel & I can only aspire to write in such a fashion.

Beautiful!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Just brought forth such a peaceful calm beautiful my dear........

Michelle

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is very cute and extremely well written. I enjoyed your immediate talent of painting a vivid picture with your words. Your dream-like portayal in this piece was excellent :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jillian Alexis
Jillian Alexis

Mattoon, IL



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