Live, Love and Burn

Live, Love and Burn

A Poem by PoetryPenPal
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Not as harsh as it sounds. I missed you writers cafe. Its good to be back.

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Life is hard.
Hard enough without others in the way.
The world is tough.
Tough enough to knock you down.
People are blind.
Blind enough to pass you without noticing your troubles.
But people are kind.
Kind enough to stand by your side.
Frankly, life is a living hell,
Unless you have someone who'll burn with you.

© 2014 PoetryPenPal


Author's Note

PoetryPenPal
I hope you enjoyed it. I have finally come out of my shell of innocence. Watch me bloom.

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Really highlights the value of having a good support circle of friends and family, makes life worth living.
Despite the bad moments. Honest and truthful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


PoetryPenPal

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Great line at the end. You've now entered your teenage years and where life begins to look different than when you were a child. I feel that in your words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


PoetryPenPal

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I'm not a child anymore. I've changed a lot.
icelandicblue

9 Years Ago

I can see that!
Burn with you, or burn for you

Posted 9 Years Ago


PoetryPenPal

9 Years Ago

Thanks katnisscat. I'm glad you read my poem.
katnisscat

9 Years Ago

Yeah, I like it.

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Added on November 15, 2014
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