Needle and Thread

Hold onto my heart, while I try to fix it.

It shouldn't take more than a minute.

I have been taught countless times,
on how to mend a fragile heart.

So bear with me, while I start again.

I have been through this plenty of times,
and I know I can fix it.

Let me grab my red needle and thread,
after this you won't be able to tell.

Oh dear, it seems you tore a stitch.

It's alright though, it seems I have enough
needle and thread to fix it once more.

~KB (AKA PoetryPenguin)

Author's Note

What do you guys think?

Reviews

[Karmee]

This is so wonderful, very nicely written

[SleepiePenguin]

thank you :)

[BubbleRaps]

It's bitter sweet, in a way that makes me smile. Great work.

[SleepiePenguin]

Thank you :)

[crowcapital]

Hurt and forget, be hurt and forgive. The same old song, same old story in our life and love.
I just leved the poem. Thanks for sharing.

[SleepiePenguin]

Thank you :)

[Inda]

This is fantastic,
simple language,
but used with wit
and there is a sense of honesty to it.
Well done!

[SleepiePenguin]

Thank you for reviewing and enjoying this poem! (Sorry for the late reply, still figuring out this website)