Roses in your cheeks

 Roses in your cheeks

would make the sunset sun lose its blush 

they make my dusk a deeper crimson

 Roses in your cheeks

Author's Note

i warned her

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Vividly imaged evening romance.

Good read

With love

Matthew

[Dave Brown]

the rose has always been a part of romance
very nicely done

[Sami Khalil]

A gorgeous poem; short, sweet and lovely.

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

This is a beautiful and evocative poem that really captures the romantic and sensual nature of the rose. I love the way that the you used vivid imagery and rich language to paint a picture of the speaker's love interest, and the way that the poem builds to a crescendo of passion and desire is truly breathtaking. The final line, "Roses in your cheeks," is a perfect summation of the poem's themes and is a testament to the power of love and beauty to inspire us and to move us in profound ways. Overall, I think this is a wonderful piece of writing that will resonate with anyone who has ever been swept away by the intensity of their emotions.

[Jaffer]

Thank you for such good review

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful Jaffer. You wrote everything needed in the wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Jaffer]

Thank you sir. I appreciate.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jaffer.

[Fairy Khan]

Haha. Dark.
How dreading would it be to get such a proposal? But I loved reading something not so cliché.

[Jaffer]

thank you for commenting. Im still constructing this profile. I'll read your poetry soon.