Beat

A song/rap I wrote to motivate my friend. She wants to be a dancer. I hope you enjoy!

Shake that foot

Click that boot

Not to be mute

Dance to that beat

Sing to the beat

Forget that it's the street

Shake that boot

Rub that foot

Up and down against the floor

Forget that it's the street

Sing to the beat

Dance to the beat

Forget that it's the street

Reviews

[Asante]

I liked this! It had an innocence to it, a jazzy flavor to it, that I don't see too much in writings as a whole anymore. I could almost hear a Bruno Mars-esque instrumental being played in the background to this, and I love me some Bruno Mars music, so that's a plus from me. All in all, solid stuff, Pol! :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Nice! This is a back in the day poem for many, not me, but I did enjoy this. I wish things like this, singing and dancing on the corners still exist. Maybe it does, but not where I live. Great poem, tyfs!

[Polly]

Well, it's true that street performances aren't that common in this age, but on occasion, it's pretty fun! Thank you for your review. :)

[ManasaC]

I am dancing now!!!!!!!! :-)

[Polly]

Haha, I'm glad this makes people want to dance. xD

[Manu]

Nicely written rap/song :-). Everyone would like to dance on this song :-) :-)
I like the line Forget that it's the street.
Keep it up :-)

[Polly]

Thank you, Gorthi, once again for your kind words!

[Manu]

pleasure is mine :-)