Gentle Musing

Gentle Musing

A Poem by Pollyanna
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This came to me earlier after I noticed a pic of a flower covered cliff overlooking the ocean.

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Standing on the cliffs,
in a field of wildflowers,
under a cloudless sky,
staring out across the ocean,
wind blowing through my hair,
sun in my eyes,
thinking about the past,
hoping for the future,
held hostage by the present.

© 2011 Pollyanna


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held hostage by the present....wonderful. The blunt short lines make the imagery stand out even more. Enjoyed this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Relaxing, calm poem. Sounds like a beautiful surrounding. I wish I was there. I really felt connected reading it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

imagery and emotion captured instinctly

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If only I could fly! Wonderful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful.. I love it.. and have felt hostage myself.. xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Pollyanna
Pollyanna

Lake St. Louis, MO



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Pol·ly·an·na noun ˌpä-lē-ˈa-nə a person characterized by irrepressible optimism and a tendency to find good in everything I'm really nobody speci.. more..

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