Archaic

Archaic

A Poem by Pragati Chaudhary
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I'll kiss you so hard 
that whenever you'll feel me against your soul
Your arms would collapse holding me
in such a way that it would leave your hunger
Insecure and restless!

© 2018 Pragati Chaudhary


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it's terse and powerful, words from true emotional expression. I enjoyed it

Posted 4 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

4 Years Ago

Thankyou sooo much costa
Your words are full of love. Very passionate, I liked it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

5 Years Ago

Thankyou soo much Najam!
I love it when I get appreciation from a great writer as you are :)<.. read more
Najam Us Saher

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for such appreviation. It means a lot.
It is my pleasure reading your work.. read more
Najam Us Saher

5 Years Ago

Appreciation*
I really love your work, sister ,as always... and the last two lines are amazing...
:))

Posted 5 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

5 Years Ago

Thankyou dear Sweetheart.......
Strong words totally liked it

Posted 5 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

5 Years Ago

Thankyou soo much Farhan
You come on just a little bit too strong. (and creepy)

I assume you're an unregistered sex offender then?





Posted 5 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

5 Years Ago

Hahahahahha
Roflmao
Well, I am a serial Killer

P.S. I only use my eyes .. read more
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I believe Coyote has summed up your poem with the right words. A write of passion. For kisses of the past and kisses of the future.

Nicely written.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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5 Years Ago

Doodley, Ma'am.....Doodley.
Pragati Chaudhary

5 Years Ago


Uhpps. sooo sorry

Yeah doodley :)
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Again honestly Pragati...it superb that too in just few lines!!
The expressions in this poem makes it go 🙆!!!
Nice read😊

Posted 5 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

5 Years Ago

Thankyou Babe

:)
You did a outstanding job. The words filled with passion and great emotions. Very nice use of words my friend.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pragati Chaudhary

5 Years Ago

Thankyou soo much Coyote :)
Keep reading!
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Pragati.

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Added on May 20, 2018
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Pragati Chaudhary
Pragati Chaudhary

Bhilai, Chhattisgarh, India



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I am a box of thought process in glee! An Indian girl, bit far from the acidic attitudes and unavoidable nuisances. I write when my mind and heart goes for a walk together :) Welcome to my pieces.. more..

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