my little sister

This poem describes my love for my sister.... Sometimes I scold her even beat her but I love her a lot...This poem shows my love for her...Please read it once n review if you like it

That day when I opened my eyes,
Something different was there that morning,
I found myself sleeping beside a barbie doll,
I just couldn't believe my eyes.
That doll was unusual,
She moved her hands and legs and cried a lot.
'my birthday gift' mom announced aloud.
And I felt myself on the seventh sky,
Her smile was everything I loved alot .
Her first cry ,her first smile.,
Those memories are still alive.
I was the happiest person on the earth ,
When she first called Di.
We fight ,we argue,
But we love each other that is true.
The best companion for life,
Has been the best birthday gift of life.
I don't know sis how to thank you,
All my life I promise to be with you.
We will prove my dear sis our bond the very best.
I love you from the bottom of my heart
But proving is a bit hard.
I wish you complete those dreams which I couldn't,
I wish you reach those stages where I couldn't,
I wish we sleep every night like this,
Waking up beside my little sis.

Reviews

[Wajiha Nayeem]

aww...that's soo sweet and nice to read...i agree with najam...
u ppl atleast fight...me and my elder sister wouldnt talk to each other at all and we'd give those death stares...until and unless she got married after which we talk so much that our convos nevr end!!

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot

[look.both.ways]

Very sweet poem. I'm a little concerned with the whole -you beat her - thing, but it is very obvious that you do love her. Such a cute poem!!

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot for the review

[Carol Cashes]

As I am, and in two cases, was, not close to my siblings, surprisingly I am not envious, but glad for those who have that friend for life. Your "sis" is lucky to have you.

[pragya gaur]

Thanks ma'am for your kind read and review

[Zephyr]

You really expressed well Pragya:)
I really love your love for your sis!
Thanks for sharing this adorable piece!

[pragya gaur]

☺ thanks a lot

[Najam Us Saher]

Good one. There is something unique about sisters including the fights... 😉

[pragya gaur]

Thanks Najam ji

[Najam Us Saher]

Hey, no need to refer me as 'ji'. Please.
You are most welcome.

[Surya]

Haha, such a sweet expression of love to your l'll sister, wish her a Hi from me,
I loved it...:)

[pragya gaur]

Surya Ji...n thanks a lot

[Surya]

My plsr....:)

[danica_jayne8]

I have a litter sister, this poem was great! I really liked it. Nice job!

[pragya gaur]

Thanku Danica ji

[rowan.taylorrr]

I really like this, it's beautiful. I love the way it all adds together and shows the good relationship between you and your sibling, well work!

[pragya gaur]

Thanks xoxo Ji...I promise to do this much better than this in my next works

[Toxic Angel]

This is lovely!! Nothe everybody can get along well with their siblings, Im glad you do, the poem is beatiful, love the doll part.

[pragya gaur]

Thanks angel Ji...I respect your reviews...keep reveiwing ...this is all I need

[Sofia]

That's such an adorable bond both of u share...keep it up :)
Wonderful poem...i liked it..😊

[pragya gaur]

Thanks Sofia dear

[Sofia]

My pleasure 😃