Dear first crush

Dear first crush

A Poem by pragya gaur
"

And suddenly today I remembered him. A life meant years ago. Just a crush who left me with many dreams and unanswered questions

"
I was not of that age,
My job was not that even,
God knows what attracted me,
Each day I felt falling for you.

God knows what happened,
But I had butterflies in stomach,
Whenever I saw you,
Or you called out my name.

Friendship was another thing,
But I was jealous,
If I saw any girl around you,
I really didn't know what was happening.

Dear crush, You took me to another world,
You made me day dreamer,
I was bringing movie things in real life,
And I really didn't know what was happening.


You really used to take my heart away,
With your new ways of flirting,
From friends to best friends,
Now you were dragging to soulmates.

Dear crush, what were you up to??
It was really hard to understand.
At time of studying, I was finding ways of impressing,
I really didn't know what was happening to me.

My attendance used to be full,
And you were the reason for it,
Each day you made me fall for you,
Dear crush, now tell me what magic you did.

Teachers were after me,
And I kept secretly watching you,
Each day, I don't know what,
I found new in you.

I felt like my mind was hacked,
And heart was being snatched.
Dear crush, you mastered all my actions,
Now tell me what you did, please.

You were my first crush,
You did some magic to me,
I really didn't know what was happening,
God knows what happened to me.

Then suddenly I lost the track of you,
Just a goodbye and you'll find a better one,
All calls and messages ignored and m still waiting like fools,
Will you please give a reason, even one?

Brought a new happiness, rejoice and left in between,
Will you please explain the reason behind.?

© 2018 pragya gaur


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

The first crush. I still remember my first crust 45 years later. Nice flow or words and thoughts. Good to appreciate another person from afar. sometime they may be looking at you. Thank you Pragya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pragya gaur

2 Years Ago

Thanku so much for the read and review such things motivate a lot
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I enjoyed your work and you are welcome.



Reviews

Our first crush really can be... Crushing... Magically so, or horrifically so.... Either/or... This was a nice little travel down the memory of those first real blushes, painful pangs of want... Behind or in between sometimes we are left with memories... Soft and sweet and bitter...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pragya gaur

1 Year Ago

Thanku so much for this comment... Sorry m very late for the reply as m inactive
We barely know what love is until we get our hearts broken.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pragya gaur

2 Years Ago

But it is about crush... Just an attraction...
Karen John

2 Years Ago

That's true...but crushes can also break your heart.
pragya gaur

2 Years Ago

Yeah mine was broken too... The last lines reveal it
Your poem is a nicely detailed description of how this narrator FEELS . . . but we really do not know very much about the object of her affections. I love the obsessive, childlike way you paint this picture, as if this narrator has no control, only bouncing around with a big crush & no common sense. That's exactly how things used to go, at a very young age. But to make this crush sound a little bit more mature, it would be good to also show us this other person . . . a black box to us . . . show us why you felt all these things about him!?!?! Just ideas for future writings (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pragya gaur

2 Years Ago

I will surely work on your suggestion... And thanku so much for reading thanks a lot
Interesting. Good to see you posting after a long time.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

I am good. Thank you.
pragya gaur

2 Years Ago

😊😊 happy to talk to you after long
Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

Same here :)
not sure why they happen or what exactly is the chemical reaction in heart and mind...i had one in grade school...she never knew...i never felt she would pay attention to someone like me...years later there was a class reunion...i wanted to tell her then...just so we could both laugh...but she had passed from cancer just a short time before that...i was sad to not get the chance...should have acted on it back then...maybe?
thanks for this poem which brought a smile to my face.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pragya gaur

2 Years Ago

A sad story...btw thanks for the read and review
The first crush. I still remember my first crust 45 years later. Nice flow or words and thoughts. Good to appreciate another person from afar. sometime they may be looking at you. Thank you Pragya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pragya gaur

2 Years Ago

Thanku so much for the read and review such things motivate a lot
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I enjoyed your work and you are welcome.
I suppose that's what crushes are.
People grow and move on.
Just like life.
But the memories still linger.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pragya gaur

2 Years Ago

Yeah true... And thanks for the read

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

211 Views
7 Reviews
Rating
Added on September 23, 2018
Last Updated on September 23, 2018


Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..