Angry Guitar

Lyrical form of anger of my guitar.

Pre-verse of Angry Guitar (Lyrics)

My Guitar is angry with me,

           Don’t know the reason what’s going wrong

Each chord now sounds bad,

           Its not gonna play a single song

Many times I persuade,

          But it’s mood is still bad

E A D G B E are less,

         I tried it from A to Z

Finally it screams at me that,

          You didn’t touch me from very long.

My Guitar is angry with me,

          Don’t know the reason what’s going wrong.

Author's Note

Its a pre-verse of a song I composed an year ago.Here E A D G B E refers to six guitar strings.

Reviews

[Arjun Singh]

Strting to bdhiya hai.....kbhi pura gaanaa bhi dalo bhai!!
bdhiya hai, u hv talnt, khaas kr aftr i read ur pya jaa raha hai
gd job, keep writing!

[Prashant Pandey]

Thnx brother :-)

[Priscilla Nishi]

so did u find out why he was angry with u in the end ? ;)

[Prashant Pandey]

Finally it screams at me that,

You didn’t touch me from very long.
thanks for your time :)

[Priscilla Nishi]

lol! got it

[Kousika]

Your poem is very close to your guitar.. I could see some feeling (may be 'cause I love playing musics......)
.. Good job..

[Prashant Pandey]

thanks for d kind words. :-)

[Neetu Mathew]

I an illiterate about guitars :P...but i enjoyed your poem :)

[Prashant Pandey]

Thnx. Glad u liked it :)

[Basu Gupta]

Something unique I can say..though everytime I play my guitar it always comforts me,relieves me..and makes me fall in love with again n again..

The Line referring E standard tuning sounds interesting..a part which only a known guitarist can relate to..
Casual yet deep..
Loved to see this kinda stuff..Thanks for sharing

[Prashant Pandey]

Thnx for the kind words.

[Jeyanthi]

Nice work! Keep playing too, who knows next time you might hit an another wonderful stage. :)


P.S: May be it can't withstand the wired noise you tried to make. :P

[Prashant Pandey]

He he. Thnx for ur time.

[Shubham Joshi]

Give your guitar a fine tuning, it will come around.

[Prashant Pandey]

ha ha thanks Shubham.

[Avinash]

Practice is important my friend. You need not leave it alone for long.

[Prashant Pandey]

Thnx for advice :-)

[~]

Ahaha :) amusing and fun read. I can relate with the guitar sentiments and I am sure the skin of the fingertips is complaining too :)

[Prashant Pandey]

Whoa. That's right, great insight. Thanks for the review.