The arranged love

The arranged love

A Book by Pravir
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A journey of forgetting my first love

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© 2017 Pravir


Author's Note

Pravir
Based on real life situations. . . hope u all review on the plot instead of my grammatical mistakes . . . i knw there are a lot and i am working on it

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This is a great story! It's rare to see such a short story which includes so much information & intensity of feeling. It's the perfect short length for people who often don't want to read longer pieces on websites like these. I was very much immersed in your story from start to finish & the ending took me by surprise -- everything was going so happily, I didn't think this would take a bad turn. The ending is very brief, yet it's clear what the problem is -- some old girlfriend is now a neighbor -- this is very well done to just leave it that way, leave it to the reader's imagination to wonder how complicated this is going to be, going forward. I would be remiss if I didn't mention that the structure of your English is a little bumpy, but everything is understandable, if not perfect. Please keep practicing, you will get better at this. The important thing is good storytelling, as you have done here, & polishing up your English will happen as you continue to read & practice writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Pravir

3 Years Ago

A heart whelming thanx for ur review . . . and as english is not my first language i m trying hard a.. read more

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Pravir
Pravir

asansol, west bengal, India



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i am 22. .,. an electrical engineer.. i know writing has nothing to do with my profession... but still i write,not to become famous ... its just that i find solace in expressing my untold emotions an.. more..

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