My World With You

My World With You

A Poem by Princepessa

You make the world light up

The sun shine bright

Everything glistens

In your sunshine

 

Every glimpse of you

Makes my day

My world is pretty

When you say 'Hey'

 

Your in my dreams

And they're all sunny

Full of fun and love

Sweet as honey

 

One day I dreamt

They wonderfull things

Now you're unreachable

Theres no more dreaming

 

 

© 2011 Princepessa


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aw that's so sad


Posted 13 Years Ago


thnx! Both of you.


Posted 13 Years Ago


Very sweet write, I agree. I love the love you pour in this poem, a very positive poem as well! I love how you say the world lit up cause he/she is your sunshine! Its such a great comparison, and again, its so sweet :)
I love all the love you put behind this poem, and i love the idea of this poem as well! A good flow :)
Nice written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a very sweet write. Enjoyable read.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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