Slow

Slow

A Poem by JillyBean
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Another old one about my old high school crush.

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Hello there my dear.

Are you wondering why I’m here?

I’m going to give you a piece of my mind.

Don’t worry I’ll be kind.


Hey there don’t be shy, don’t play coy!

You know exactly what I’m talking about boy!

I know what you’ve done,

Standing there so smug, you think you won?


You’ve taken part of my heart

And you’re slowly ripping it apart.

It was fine for a bit

I figured you’d grow bored and quit.


I don’t want this to be a production or a big show

But if you want to kill me, don’t be so slow.

© 2011 JillyBean


Author's Note

JillyBean
Another old one. This one was actually inspired in part by a song in the credits of a movie. What movie? No idea. It was a while ago.

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It's a sad poem but well written. Contentment could play a big part here. Some people leave because they're not happy and still asking for more. Things that we couldn't give them or for them, are not enough.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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