A way out

when I read this poem of mine sometimes... i feel kinda disturbed. :|

I don’t know how some people find it easy to break somebody,
to break more than just bones,
to leave someone when she needed you the most.
even though she was always there,
someone left her all alone and said later I'll be there.
but the clock ticks by there's no response, she knows her time is running out.
she fears that she might be too late.
I don’t know how people find it easy to change a very happy person into something numb.
now all she feels is that she is dumb.
try as she may to think of anything positive,
each day of hers turns into a can of trash!
like she was a victim of a car crash.
outside she is pale and faking a smile,
but she's totally fucked up inside.
every damn thing in her life tortures her now,
she cant see no bright side.
trying to hide, trying to walk with a head held high.
but she's losing it!
losing her real self
turning into something fake...
its not her its not the way she used to be!
crying her eyes out bleeding internally!
though she knows there are people who care for her,
guess she is not all that unlucky.
yet the days pass by wiping her hopes away.
promises... f**k that word is void and invalid!
yeah she's laughing... at her own state!
everyone's laughing...
she's just a phony clown!
get a life girl there's no one around...
eyes are getting dizzy the visions get hazy,
the mirror is blurred she can't even see her clearly.
time will run out...the feeling of regret will stay.
she will change...
fully change
into someone she feared to be,
struggling inside and thinking how to get out.
but she will be lost somewhere, behind a glass frame.
there's no way out….
she doesn't know if its breakable.
she knows everything isn't as fragile as her.
Some one, shatter the glass.
But I don’t see a way out.
She sure does need some help,
But… is there a way out?

Reviews

[r]

This is awesomely amazingly beautifully...I should stop now. :D I loved this TO DEATH. And the picture fits perfectly. The imagery, the flow, the rhyming, is all put together to meld this into a beyond cool poem.

[Princy]

this is basically one of the cases,...where yr dependent on some one... u feel helpless n broken...

[deeps]

she will change...
fully change
into someone she feared to be,
struggling inside and thinking how to get out.
but she will be lost somewhere, behind a glass frame.

Love these lines here, This is amazing
I enjoyed this write.