Nocturnal Rocking

A Poem by Tom Friel

And so watched

Within ourselves

Minds that rivet

Back and forth

Like rocking chairs

Full of

Life

Full of happiness

But mostly failures

That fill our lives

A workman's rock

Perpetually

Hoping like fools

Our nocturnal rocking

Might somehow

Shine away

The ugly dust

Of what we are

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great poem...really gets one reminiscing about one's life...good job here

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Added on December 1, 2009

Not much to say, an average guy, more or less. more..

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